tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post4374580025622470063..comments2023-11-29T02:47:41.224-06:00Comments on Begin Again: Magpie tale #35Suzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-33237317697228963302010-10-13T19:29:33.979-05:002010-10-13T19:29:33.979-05:00Invite you to try the prompts at Writer's Isla...Invite you to try the prompts at <a href="http://writersisland.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow"><i>Writer's Island</i></a>...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-55637432670383747322010-10-10T10:41:00.468-05:002010-10-10T10:41:00.468-05:00Such a poignant poem, really heartbreaking.Such a poignant poem, really heartbreaking.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-34346840120065089082010-10-09T13:38:38.527-05:002010-10-09T13:38:38.527-05:00What a powerful poem. Words like this won't fo...What a powerful poem. Words like this won't form to often. I really feel it.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-88097463368026420012010-10-09T09:10:52.318-05:002010-10-09T09:10:52.318-05:00super smooth word flow..
well constructed magpie!super smooth word flow..<br />well constructed magpie!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-4785539753437848262010-10-08T16:41:56.148-05:002010-10-08T16:41:56.148-05:00Oh Carrie..thank you...I cried buckets writing it....Oh Carrie..thank you...I cried buckets writing it...but it was goodSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-81110805038248263152010-10-08T16:32:52.217-05:002010-10-08T16:32:52.217-05:00Oh Suz this just griped at my heart...i think this...Oh Suz this just griped at my heart...i think this is one of my favorites of your poems...truly beautifully written...i love it!<br />:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-40538361154282783692010-10-08T11:39:52.089-05:002010-10-08T11:39:52.089-05:00Deborah...I claim her as sister too
in a kindred s...Deborah...I claim her as sister too<br />in a kindred sister way..thanks for your kind wordsSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-33212966970074333402010-10-08T10:55:40.698-05:002010-10-08T10:55:40.698-05:00... so deeply and very beautifully written!
and th...... so deeply and very beautifully written!<br />and thank you for popping by via my lovely sisters blog and leaving such a lovely comment :o)Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-59540904304509087872010-10-08T10:04:39.366-05:002010-10-08T10:04:39.366-05:00so very very sad- I wish for you a Spring of JOY.so very very sad- I wish for you a Spring of JOY.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-83914978820856629642010-10-08T09:43:51.591-05:002010-10-08T09:43:51.591-05:00Sadness now is part of the joy to come. Beautiful ...Sadness now is part of the joy to come. Beautiful thoughts, Suz.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-90792668742212231392010-10-08T08:03:11.767-05:002010-10-08T08:03:11.767-05:00such longing!
you will hear those songs again...y...such longing!<br /><br />you will hear those songs again...you will find peaceAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-1910534367753083512010-10-07T16:35:32.295-05:002010-10-07T16:35:32.295-05:00Wonderful writing, well done Suz!Wonderful writing, well done Suz!Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831017007089393889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-45421134376252376792010-10-07T15:29:45.209-05:002010-10-07T15:29:45.209-05:00This was so well written I could feel the sadness....This was so well written I could feel the sadness.<br />Well done Suzchristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08720643762397784519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-38129790316653737632010-10-07T15:09:50.778-05:002010-10-07T15:09:50.778-05:00This poem takes me to the depths of sadness which ...This poem takes me to the depths of sadness which is almost palpable, an autumn sadness leading to winter.Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-76331281889474640312010-10-07T14:32:31.923-05:002010-10-07T14:32:31.923-05:00Oh dear Stafford, I feel the depths to be able to ...Oh dear Stafford, I feel the depths to be able to feel the heights of joy<br />thank you wise man who knows about such thingsSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-52837846629208456582010-10-07T12:58:16.755-05:002010-10-07T12:58:16.755-05:00Oh dear! Such loss in this lament. You really have...Oh dear! Such loss in this lament. You really have truthfully expressed the desolation. <br /><br />PS. thank you for the gift of this little poem <br />"as the leaves fall like years<br />yes the truth<br />makes winter easier"<br /><br />Then comes spring and renewal, my wish for you.Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-39619296160255943612010-10-07T12:44:58.378-05:002010-10-07T12:44:58.378-05:00Oh Suz ... I can feel the sadness and despair oozi...Oh Suz ... I can feel the sadness and despair oozing from your poem. True and honest your Magpie!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6510596473943702617.post-48498851283051654942010-10-07T12:01:47.122-05:002010-10-07T12:01:47.122-05:00I can so relate to this not on the love part but m...I can so relate to this not on the love part but mainly on the winter part. My first Magpie #19 is kind of along these lines and then I try really hard to change my thinking and Magpie #62 is a little better. I loved your poem. It spoke to me.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.com