Wednesday, May 2, 2012

magpietale #115

he reads his novel
sits in his narcissism
with a pruney soul


exhibitionist
your soul naked would reveal
a shriveled small man


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14 comments:

  1. ugh...that last little bit...aint that the truth...and hiding behind most narcisists there is...nailed this one...

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  2. yes, pruney soul totally says it ;) - love your interpretation

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  3. hahahaha, she throws back her head and laughs hysterically...
    I love this for personal reasons. Sitting in his narcissism...perfect. It is an interesting prompt and you certainly rose to the occasion. Loved it, loved it.

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    1. oh realllly!?!?
      good
      made you laugh.....I hate the image of old fat naked men...had to do something with it,,,hee hheee

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  4. short and punchy.....strong..

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  5. Love how brilliantly you brought the truth home in this one Suz!!! Hope you have an awesome weekend! :-)

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  6. As always!.. Few words but great write!..

    JJRod'z

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  7. pruney soul, love this phrase

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  8. ha! ha! sticking it to the man..lol!

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  9. Interesting read. I do think this says something about men in our lives that rarely look outside themselves. Well put. I really like "pruney soul".

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