he reads his novel
sits in his narcissism
with a pruney soul
exhibitionist
your soul naked would reveal
a shriveled small man
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
exhibitionist
your soul naked would reveal
a shriveled small man
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
Ouch .... (in a good way)
ReplyDeleteugh...that last little bit...aint that the truth...and hiding behind most narcisists there is...nailed this one...
ReplyDeletePruney soul tells it all...
ReplyDeleteyes, pruney soul totally says it ;) - love your interpretation
ReplyDeletenifty and neat!
ReplyDeletehahahaha, she throws back her head and laughs hysterically...
ReplyDeleteI love this for personal reasons. Sitting in his narcissism...perfect. It is an interesting prompt and you certainly rose to the occasion. Loved it, loved it.
oh realllly!?!?
Deletegood
made you laugh.....I hate the image of old fat naked men...had to do something with it,,,hee hheee
short and punchy.....strong..
ReplyDeletethank haiku you
DeleteLove how brilliantly you brought the truth home in this one Suz!!! Hope you have an awesome weekend! :-)
ReplyDeleteAs always!.. Few words but great write!..
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
pruney soul, love this phrase
ReplyDeleteha! ha! sticking it to the man..lol!
ReplyDeleteInteresting read. I do think this says something about men in our lives that rarely look outside themselves. Well put. I really like "pruney soul".
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