Sunday, May 9, 2010

Microfiction Monday #30

Susan at http://www.stonyriver.ie/ hosts a weekly writing prompt using only 140 character or less.





Write using the below photo prompt

I followed
three saffron robed men
and I still never found
the way
past mellow yellow

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24 comments:

  1. Safron robed , love the detail that you put in with so few characters.
    ...and then I LOL at the end.
    Perfect!

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  2. Excellent...very clever...and quite elusive.

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  3. Suz, I just love this one!! You managed to be fun, humorous, and serious in such a short, perfect way! Nice!

    BTW: You might check out the three I posted on Dec 10th......

    Rick

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  4. So.. old hippies out there who remember, eh?
    Christopher..elusive indeed..still
    Rick..I checked it out..I LOVED IT!
    it was very good... and true

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  5. What a great one for the day, Suz! I love it and the end is perfect! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  6. ah, getting back to the mellow yellow days. that's a witty microfiction. have a great week ahead.

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  7. That's because they weren't on the yellow brick road...cute caption!

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  8. Very clever take, indeed!
    Excellent!
    Mine is here
    Happy Monday!
    Happy MM!
    hugs
    shakira

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  9. Very clever, back to the hippy era. :)

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  10. you are too funny!! i've read several mfmonday posts but yours tickled me to the point of smiling...and i haven't even had my first cup of coffe yet ;) thanks suz!

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  11. Mellow yellow is a great place to stay though, so no worries. You don't want to shave your head anyway...

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  12. LOL. One can so easily be distracted from the spiritual path.

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  13. This reminded me of my son. His favorite soda is Mellow Yellow, but I'm sure that's not what you meant. :)

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  14. Very clever MM. I'm still smiling.

    My MM: Standout
     

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  15. mello yellow is a good drink!
    i can't get past it either!

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  16. Hey! I was beginning to worry, you were out of the office for a few days. Glad you're back!

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  17. I remember mellow yellow. It always got stuck in my head for a while.
    Like now. Thanks a lot.

    Thanks for your comment on mine.
    gregj
    day by day

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  18. That made me smile :o)

    I wonder where in the world those Buddhist monks are going?

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  19. In regard to the comment you left on my blog-- no I did not notice that but I just checked it out and um, well, it kinda tickled me. Very nice. Will need to look at that blog a bit more when I am not a work :o) Very interesting!

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  20. Commenting late, but better late than never, eh?!

    Yours sounds almost like a Buddhist koan... but then there's that great twist at the end!! Good one!

    Hope your week's going well.

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  21. Hey Michael..I worked hard on that little ditty...glad you caught the subtlety...yeah!
    actually all that ran through my head was...I"m just mad about Saffron..She's just wild about me... good save..I believe

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