Sunday, September 26, 2010

microfiction #50!


140 character meme




She held the found wallet in her hands.
She could use the money.
But,the quietness of the sea and the setting sun
changed her mind.

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36 comments:

  1. Fabulous photo and words! Nothing is better than the quietness of the sea at sunset.

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  2. I am finding it hard to express in words how your words paint a snapshot of someones life, this crossroads which comes in many different forms which we must all face from time to time. Superb!

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  3. Glad that she had a change of Heart. A sit looking at the Sea is a good place to clear one's mind. Wonderful microfiction Suz.

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  4. i could sit at that beautiful location forever and wouldn't it be fun that chat with that person.

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  5. Great place to get perspective. Those waves lapping will clear the most clouded head.

    Nice MFM Suz

    have a restful week - plz

    Moonie love

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  6. Wonderful exploration of a difficult choice.

    Very nice!

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  7. I'm pleased the calmness of the sea made her change her mind. Wonderful MM.

    Have a lovely week x

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  8. The sea changes so much, doesn't it?
    Nice one.

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  9. Nice story suz. :-)

    mine is here - http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/09/microfiction-monday-50.html

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  10. A very difficult choice when there are two kinds of need at stake! You capture that critical moment beautifully!

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  11. It is indeed amazing how God uses His creation to remind us of what is the right thing to do . . . and then allows us to choose whether or not to do it.

    Beautiful....

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  12. Maybe she will find the owner, or do something philanthropic with the money? This is a unique take on the photo. I love how different each story is...something different pops into each person's mind.

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  13. What a wonderful take on the prompt.
    Well done!

    Mine is up

    Have you a Blessed Week!
    hugs
    shakira

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  14. Oh! A morality tale. Nice way to go. I can't say that I'd be so honest, ut maybe I would. Well done!

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  15. Such a big story in so few words! Lovely!

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  16. that's the downside, perhaps, of spending one's time gazing at deep waters... lovely mf

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  17. In the quiet her conscience spoke to her. Really liked this MFM.

    Mine is up.

    PG

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  18. A captured moment of conscience. Well done!

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  19. Good for her! My 140 Hope your week goes well

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  20. A wonderful piece of writing, Suz.

    Have a great week.

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  21. Ah, honesty it is a good thing!

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  22. Great interpretation! I enjoyed it!

    [thanks for the critique: I agree with you :-)]

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  23. I could use a wallet filled with money right about now!!! Have a great week. Cheers!

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  24. perspective.

    you're the best, suz!!!!!!!

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  25. What a take on the prompt.. Lovely... Glad she had a change of heart

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  26. Wonderful! Nature puts things into perspective.

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  27. Sometimes we just need a quiet place like this rock so that we can get our bearings and get back on track.

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  28. Nice. nature helped her do the right thing.

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