I am finding it hard to express in words how your words paint a snapshot of someones life, this crossroads which comes in many different forms which we must all face from time to time. Superb!
It is indeed amazing how God uses His creation to remind us of what is the right thing to do . . . and then allows us to choose whether or not to do it.
Maybe she will find the owner, or do something philanthropic with the money? This is a unique take on the photo. I love how different each story is...something different pops into each person's mind.
Fabulous photo and words! Nothing is better than the quietness of the sea at sunset.
ReplyDeleteI am finding it hard to express in words how your words paint a snapshot of someones life, this crossroads which comes in many different forms which we must all face from time to time. Superb!
ReplyDeleteGlad that she had a change of Heart. A sit looking at the Sea is a good place to clear one's mind. Wonderful microfiction Suz.
ReplyDeletei could sit at that beautiful location forever and wouldn't it be fun that chat with that person.
ReplyDeleteGreat place to get perspective. Those waves lapping will clear the most clouded head.
ReplyDeleteNice MFM Suz
have a restful week - plz
Moonie love
Wonderful exploration of a difficult choice.
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
Honest and sweet...Nice Job!
ReplyDeleteI'm pleased the calmness of the sea made her change her mind. Wonderful MM.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely week x
The sea changes so much, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteNice one.
Nice story suz. :-)
ReplyDeletemine is here - http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/09/microfiction-monday-50.html
I like this very much :o)
ReplyDeleteA very difficult choice when there are two kinds of need at stake! You capture that critical moment beautifully!
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed amazing how God uses His creation to remind us of what is the right thing to do . . . and then allows us to choose whether or not to do it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful....
Maybe she will find the owner, or do something philanthropic with the money? This is a unique take on the photo. I love how different each story is...something different pops into each person's mind.
ReplyDeleteA nice story of quiet reflection.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Mine is up
Have you a Blessed Week!
hugs
shakira
ah that's a marvelos thought!
ReplyDeleteOh! A morality tale. Nice way to go. I can't say that I'd be so honest, ut maybe I would. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSuch a big story in so few words! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteAwh bless that is lovely :O)
ReplyDeletethat's the downside, perhaps, of spending one's time gazing at deep waters... lovely mf
ReplyDeleteIn the quiet her conscience spoke to her. Really liked this MFM.
ReplyDeleteMine is up.
PG
Very unique! :O)
ReplyDeleteA captured moment of conscience. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGood for her! My 140 Hope your week goes well
ReplyDeleteA wonderful piece of writing, Suz.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
Ah, honesty it is a good thing!
ReplyDeleteGreat interpretation! I enjoyed it!
ReplyDelete[thanks for the critique: I agree with you :-)]
I could use a wallet filled with money right about now!!! Have a great week. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteperspective.
ReplyDeleteyou're the best, suz!!!!!!!
What a take on the prompt.. Lovely... Glad she had a change of heart
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Nature puts things into perspective.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we just need a quiet place like this rock so that we can get our bearings and get back on track.
ReplyDeleteNice. nature helped her do the right thing.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! What a moment captured too.
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