Lovely but sad Magpie, Suz.
ah but it's only fiction Brigid..:)
your little stories always grab the heart
Oh, that's so poignant and well written. It went straight to my heart, Suz."Don't look so sad, I know it's over..."
I agree with John, your stories do grab the heart.
What a sad, blue song. Hope love returns soon.
...coming to an end blues... love this! Perfect poetic music!
I can see this couple, know how they feel.How do you do that?
Sublime - fully captures the inherent promise of intimate poetry. Exemplary.
your words take the breathe away...you are so blessed at entangling words....wowBlessYourHeartSuz
I like this one! Thanks
a lovely song could ease all the sweat and anxiety...lovely magpie.
Sad and lovely.(I couldn't help but think of the line "The night was sultry" from Throw Mama from the Train! hee)
Ha! hee is right Tess
Steve, thank you for your encouraging wordsI hate writing lovey stuffI like the deeper darker sidethat truly is the stuff of life and livingand loving
Blues music is the perfect 'get into your head' tonic ... love this.
blues- the staff of life...love your poem
"Coming to an end blues"..what else but the blues for that moment..touching..
almost remembered loveSad, but true!
Poignant. I've heard that song, too. Lovely rendition!
there is unfortunately alwasy and end...lovely...bkm
ahh I loved thinking about sultry and summer here in the cold and winter...great little poem, hot!
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