Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Magpie tales #48

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Amicable

The sun goes down on
 this hot, sultry, summer night
our bodies wet with heat
and almost remembered love
You reach your hand across unsure
Outside the robin sings a song
I know
the coming to an end blues

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24 comments:

  1. Brigid O'ConnorJanuary 11, 2011 at 2:14 PM

    Lovely but sad Magpie, Suz.

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  2. SuzJanuary 11, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    ah but it's only fiction Brigid..:)

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  3. JohnJanuary 11, 2011 at 2:48 PM

    your little stories always grab the heart

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  4. DeborahJanuary 11, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    Wnderfully poignant.

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  5. FireblossomJanuary 11, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    Oh, that's so poignant and well written. It went straight to my heart, Suz.

    "Don't look so sad, I know it's over..."

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  6. Marilyn & JeffJanuary 11, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    I agree with John, your stories do grab the heart.

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  7. anthonynorthJanuary 11, 2011 at 5:10 PM

    Beautifully emotional.

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  8. Rosaria WilliamsJanuary 11, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    What a sad, blue song. Hope love returns soon.

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  9. MargaretJanuary 11, 2011 at 6:24 PM

    ...coming to an end blues... love this! Perfect poetic music!

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  10. life in red shoesJanuary 11, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    I can see this couple, know how they feel.
    How do you do that?

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  11. Steve IsaakJanuary 11, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    Sublime - fully captures the inherent promise of intimate poetry. Exemplary.

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  12. DarJanuary 11, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    your words take the breathe away...you are so blessed at entangling words....wow
    BlessYourHeartSuz

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  13. annell4January 11, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    I like this one! Thanks

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  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 11, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    a lovely song could ease all the sweat and anxiety...

    lovely magpie.

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  15. Tess KincaidJanuary 12, 2011 at 7:06 AM

    Sad and lovely.

    (I couldn't help but think of the line "The night was sultry" from Throw Mama from the Train! hee)

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  16. SuzJanuary 12, 2011 at 8:32 AM

    Ha! hee is right Tess

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  17. SuzJanuary 12, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    Steve, thank you for your encouraging words
    I hate writing lovey stuff
    I like the deeper darker side
    that truly is
    the stuff of life and living
    and loving

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  18. HelenJanuary 12, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    Blues music is the perfect 'get into your head' tonic ... love this.

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  19. Kathe W.January 12, 2011 at 7:15 PM

    blues- the staff of life...love your poem

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  20. LynJanuary 12, 2011 at 7:31 PM

    "Coming to an end blues"..what else but the blues for that moment..touching..

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  21. JinksyJanuary 13, 2011 at 5:28 AM

    almost remembered love

    Sad, but true!

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  22. Tumblewords:January 13, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    Poignant. I've heard that song, too. Lovely rendition!

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  23. signed...bkmJanuary 14, 2011 at 6:17 PM

    there is unfortunately alwasy and end...lovely...bkm

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  24. UnknownJanuary 17, 2011 at 1:53 PM

    ahh I loved thinking about sultry and summer here in the cold and winter...great little poem, hot!

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