Magpie # 54
Revealed
Life had been a series of puzzle
pieces,scattered,turned around,
ill fitting,missing jigsawed days
until the right one of me
emerged and looked at the bigger picture
Then every bit of it fell into place,
interlocking,revealing a why for every piece
Not one left in the box
unclaimed
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I love this! I wonder if I'll discover that my pieces actually have a meaning & fit together?
ReplyDeleteQuite profound Suz, as usual....
ReplyDeleteWonderful and elegant piece..can only have been written by one who has lived life!
ReplyDeleteAmazing write. I was right with you, life is but a series of questions, that could be seen as puzzle pieces. I didn't realize the answers would come, and it would all fall into place. I thought it remained a series of unanswered questions.
ReplyDeleteI will wait....perhaps the answers are on the way....but what about the mystery? If all the pieces fall into place and no pieces unclaimed in the box? Is it too much to ask? Food for thought, loved each word!
Bug.. they do..thanks for your kind words
ReplyDeleteJohn you are too kind..but I love it
Lyn...oh yes, and it took quite a while before all of it revealed its purpose Thanks..elegant? wow
Oh Annell...ha ha
ReplyDeleteno, no pieces ,good or bad, left
unclaimed....they all fit
making me who I am
and this does not take the mystery of life "yet to live" away
hug you for your comments always
It is all these questions that makes life interesting...
ReplyDeletescattered with the wind
How lovely to reach completion and be happy. I like this, very much.
ReplyDeletejabblog...we're always a work in progress..but yes, I am happy
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment
It's great when all the pieces come together...
ReplyDeleteHello Trellissimo, thank you for the comment and yes it is great
ReplyDeletetoo bad this is fiction ;)
Oh Suz, I love this.
ReplyDelete'missing jigsawed days
until the right one of me
emerged and looked at the bigger picture'
Great Magpie! x
Sometimes we just can't make sense of it until years later and then it makes perfect sense. Wonderful Magpie.
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