"Darkness snares his feet" is an incredible line.Wonderful piece, suz.
I agree with Michael - it's a wonderful line.Very nice, suz!
Michael, you know that word came in revisingrevising you say..of a microfiction..sick isn't itthank youJabblog..why thank you...mental illness is a snaring thing isn't itafterall...
Suz, you have some mind! Great story.
So few words, so much to think about! Love it...It makes me think about an installation I saw once about a old hotel in Seattle.
Oh yes, mental institutions are just awful...would visit my mother and have that sick feeling never leaves....could not watch One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest...you describe the walls well...bkm
Darkness snares his feet..perfect, so visual and full of emotion..quite sad to stop...
Terrible places.Beautiful prose.
This wee piece really made me stop and think. I read it and re-read it. How sad it must be when darkness wins.
Very, very nice! Don't let the dark hold you!
this is one case when i would run to the light...nicely played.
Wow...what an interesting picture.Reminds me of a school hallway.Love the words you put to it.Have a nice weekend.Hugs, Dogwood
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