Michael, you know that word came in revising revising you say..of a microfiction..sick isn't it thank you Jabblog..why thank you...mental illness is a snaring thing isn't it afterall...
Oh yes, mental institutions are just awful...would visit my mother and have that sick feeling never leaves....could not watch One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest...you describe the walls well...bkm
"Darkness snares his feet" is an incredible line.
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece, suz.
I agree with Michael - it's a wonderful line.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, suz!
Michael, you know that word came in revising
ReplyDeleterevising you say..of a microfiction..sick isn't it
thank you
Jabblog..why thank you...mental illness is a snaring thing isn't it
afterall...
Suz, you have some mind! Great story.
ReplyDeleteSo few words, so much to think about! Love it...It makes me think about an installation I saw once about a old hotel in Seattle.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, mental institutions are just awful...would visit my mother and have that sick feeling never leaves....could not watch One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest...you describe the walls well...bkm
ReplyDeleteDarkness snares his feet..perfect, so visual and full of emotion..quite sad to stop...
ReplyDeleteTerrible places.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful prose.
This wee piece really made me stop and think. I read it and re-read it. How sad it must be when darkness wins.
ReplyDeleteVery, very nice! Don't let the dark hold you!
ReplyDeletethis is one case when i would run to the light...nicely played.
ReplyDeleteWow...what an interesting picture.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of a school hallway.
Love the words you put to it.
Have a nice weekend.
Hugs, Dogwood