Sunday, August 8, 2010

Microfiction

microfiction#43
hosts a weekly writing prompt
using the below photo
write using only 140 character or less




While packing books,a saved postcard fell out.
My husband,Joe,picked it up and read it:
Marry me Peg!
This,he still hasn't unpacked.


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-137- characters of fiction

32 comments:

  1. What a nice post (and postcard!). Have a great week!

    http://sylviamorice.wordpress.com

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  2. Awk-ward! ROFL What an intriguing story behind such a moment - I loved it.

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  3. He prolly didn't have a Postcard stamp!!

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  4. Very intriguing. I want to know more, like who was Peg?!

    I really enjoyed this one, Suz.

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  5. Ooh, interesting! I think we may have been on the same wavelength this week!

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  6. I'm assuming that the speaker isn't Peg? Unless she IS Peg but the postcard wasn't from him?
    Tell us more!

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  7. So Joe picks it up and reads. My money is on that the wife has some fast talking to do! Gone for SF adventure today. My 140 is here

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  8. Excellent one.. I have a special love for this particular theme of yours due to personal reasons.It actually hurt me.. But Thank you for this one,,,

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  9. Since the postcard is very old, hoping the sentiment is too. And, he didn't send it, right?

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  10. This makes me want to know more. :)

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  11. It raises so many possibilities and so many interpretations. Very clever.

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  12. I does seem we were thinking of the same beginning. I guess it happens so often, you open a book, and an old slip of paper drops out. And sometimes it is a post card. That was fun.

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  13. Ooh, I, like Ellie, want to know who was Peg!! Gimme more, Suz.

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  14. The things that are hidden from Long Ago suddenly re~appear at hopefully not a bad memory.

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  15. That's one of those moments that can cause the wrong kind of fireworks! Happy to meet you through Microfiction Monday.

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  16. Hi September mom..oh yep.fireworks....But not this Joe...he gunnysacks
    glad to meet you

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  17. Very nice! Poor Joe needs to just let it go.

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  18. Suz...Suz?....SUZ!
    Are you in there?
    Guess what?
    Tonight, I was in the backyard sitting on the swing just minding my own business.
    I know, it was unusual.
    But guess what?
    I FELT A HINT OF FALL IN THE AIR!

    P.S. great writing:)

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  19. Awwww...you have given a wonderful life and story to that postcard!

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  20. Great piece, Suz, I might join that writing prompt, I need a good push to get going.

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  21. What happens in NY, stays in NY!!

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  22. I love Lyn's comment ... ditto!

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  23. Oh Lyn & Helen...we could be buds!

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