Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Wednesday poem

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BEARER

Often I think of loss
and how it seems to be
 an account
that is drawn on
when it's
added to


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22 comments:

  1. a profound thought...or even a debt that keeps accumulating...another random thought, what happens if we become overdrawn...nice thought provoker suz..thanks for playing at oneshot!

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  2. deep...
    so deep!
    BlessYourDay

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  3. this is indeed a very interesting and deep thought - provoking

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  4. Like the use of "drawn" and "account", leaves much to interpretation and thoughts about life. thanks, Suz

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  5. The simplest words leading to the most profound thoughts. Excellent.

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  6. very profound...less is more and a lot was thought in those few words....thanks for sharing with One Shot

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  7. oh, suz, this was simple and strong...so very few words but they hold such truth to them!

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  8. Loved the thought-full nature of thise post and the one before. Great work, Suz!

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  9. Cynical about balance? Your simplicity and sophistication create a nice counterpoint.

    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

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  10. Thought provoking and very deep writing my friend. Loved it x

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  11. Thought provoking and very deep writing my friend. Loved it x

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  12. Amazing how you captured the word loss and how we as used tend to use it...well done...bkm

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  13. Well thought out and expressed. This is one of those poems you could think about for a long time.

    Thanks for sharing it with One Shot

    Hugs from the Moon

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  14. you are amazing. love your way with words.

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  15. Very profound. I read it over and over, and with each reading, it got more and more personal. Well done.

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  16. Every loss I've ever had took me to every loss I've ever had
    -suz

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  17. Oh now hold on just a minute. I haven't had my coffee yet and you are asking me to think?

    Well, what I think is that you have a charming talent for saying a lot in the space of a few words.

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  18. PS--Bless you for using pop up comments. I find them so much easier and I can comment on several posts easily.

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  19. Fireblossom..I wish more would...thanks
    and bless you for commenting

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