a profound thought...or even a debt that keeps accumulating...another random thought, what happens if we become overdrawn...nice thought provoker suz..thanks for playing at oneshot!
this is indeed a very interesting and deep thought - provoking
Like the use of "drawn" and "account", leaves much to interpretation and thoughts about life. thanks, Suz
The simplest words leading to the most profound thoughts. Excellent.
very profound...less is more and a lot was thought in those few words....thanks for sharing with One Shot
oh, suz, this was simple and strong...so very few words but they hold such truth to them!
Loved the thought-full nature of thise post and the one before. Great work, Suz!
Cynical about balance? Your simplicity and sophistication create a nice counterpoint.http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
Thought provoking and very deep writing my friend. Loved it x
Amazing how you captured the word loss and how we as used tend to use it...well done...bkm
Well thought out and expressed. This is one of those poems you could think about for a long time.Thanks for sharing it with One ShotHugs from the Moon
Very thought provoking. well done.
you are amazing. love your way with words.
Very profound. I read it over and over, and with each reading, it got more and more personal. Well done.
Every loss I've ever had took me to every loss I've ever had-suz
Oh now hold on just a minute. I haven't had my coffee yet and you are asking me to think?Well, what I think is that you have a charming talent for saying a lot in the space of a few words.
PS--Bless you for using pop up comments. I find them so much easier and I can comment on several posts easily.
Fireblossom..I wish more would...thanksand bless you for commenting
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