Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Wednesday Poem

 Wednesday...another opportunity to post a poem
thanks to

Morendo


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There is a beat
and a rhythm full of
graceful movements
A symphony being
created, while
floating in darkness,
unaware
that someone
doesn't want music
and will soon
 silence
every
note

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29 comments:

  1. Thoughtful poem

    Beauty should never be suppressed. Look at all the music and art we enjoy

    Thanks my friend for sharing with One Shot

    Moon hugs

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  2. oh lord..this was heartbreaking...someone does not want that music...nice oneshot!

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  3. A true whack to the heart...great one of these oneshots!

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  4. This reminds me of my Ironic Trust poem (the first one I ever did for the Magpie). Heartwrenching.

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  5. Powerful statement you make through your words and accompanying image, Suz.

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  6. One can only be silenced reading this. You expressed difficult subject matter beautifully.

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  7. Hah! Isn't that the truth! Cute piece.

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  8. Interesting, now that I read this again, it can be taken two completely different ways. In my version, the newborn's loud cries silence every note, emerging from his muffled womb.

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  9. Powerful words and image put together. Yet, take the powerful poem away from the image and it's got so many different meanings...and all of them end up heart-breaking.

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  10. Very sad as at times it is so true.

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  11. This is terribly heartbreaking for me. I am glad Willow saw two sides of this post.

    Anyway, after reading this Suz, I feel mine to be very inadequate.

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  12. The end of this gave me a punch in the gut.
    Painfully well written, Suz.

    Rick

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  13. I guess a title would have helped
    as a title always adds to a poem
    but I didn't..instead used the image

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  14. Ouch. What we bring isn't always grown.My poem is The final seaside trip. I hope you have a good week!

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  15. You've found a beauty in a tragedy. Certainly makes one stop and think. Well done.

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  16. powerful because it's true. as usual, suz, you bring me to tears.

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  17. Life getting ready to beat us down as soon as we enter this world...but we must fight to keep the music alive.

    Very thoughtful piece.

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  18. An excellent poem for a sad thought.

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  19. OH, this makes my stomach hurt. A lot.

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  20. Amazing. Sad. So well written that I had tears in my eyes. Let the music happen and love it.

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  21. hi suz..a powerful poem and then i feel i am being swayed by the comments that evoke even more emotion..thanks for sharing with one shot..pete

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  22. Anyone would have to have a damned good reason for ejecting that CD before it played to the end! Good case for the 'morning after' pill!

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