Monday, November 15, 2010

Jingle's potluck poetry

post a poem on
 moods,feelings or emotions
join in the fun at http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

I offer this simple poem


Interweave
These are things that bound my life
I'm daughter,sister,mother,wife
A braided cord around my soul
made out of each,each one a whole
A different kind of love each part,
that knots this cord around my heart
This cord,this knot,has set me free,
You see this love returns to me

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19 comments:

  1. JohnNovember 15, 2010 at 3:37 PM

    Wonderfully said and what a truism

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  2. SuzNovember 15, 2010 at 4:27 PM

    Hi John..thanks for taking time from your moving chores
    simple poem but heartfelt
    and it only took me into my fifties to realize this....
    I guess I had to go to Oz first

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  3. Paul CNovember 15, 2010 at 4:42 PM

    A braided cord around my soul... beautiful image and truth about the various loves in our life. A braid is strong and interdependent.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 6:42 PM

    smart one.
    Glad to see you at potluck.

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  5. LynNovember 15, 2010 at 8:21 PM

    This is exceptional..the image, the words that bind..best, is the return!!

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  6. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 9:15 PM

    well said and the love will always come back

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  7. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 9:22 PM

    love it absolutely..

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  8. life in red shoesNovember 15, 2010 at 10:13 PM

    Perfect:)

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  9. ReflectionsNovember 15, 2010 at 10:45 PM

    Simple words sometimes speak from the depths of our hearts, this you have done well here.

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  10. signed...bkmNovember 16, 2010 at 2:11 AM

    Love a beauty emotion expressed in so many forms...love the knot a beautiful sign of committment to Love...bkm

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  11. ninotazizNovember 16, 2010 at 5:39 AM

    This cord,this knot,has set me free

    A paradox that makes perfect sense, Suz! As usual, simply lovely!

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  12. Vicki LaneNovember 16, 2010 at 9:19 AM

    A beautiful word image!

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  13. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 16, 2010 at 9:27 AM

    Dear Suz
    Beautiful imagery and apt picture.. love does return...


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  14. AnonymousNovember 16, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    wonderful poem. enjoyed thoroughly. nice job!

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  15. AnonymousNovember 16, 2010 at 5:36 PM

    I like the message of how we have different roles as women, and how those roles come together, with love being both the gift and the reward in these roles we play. A simple message, yet true. I also like the rhyming. :)

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  16. AnonymousNovember 16, 2010 at 8:50 PM

    nicely done, a very optimistic message and declaration. Thanks for the enjoyable read.

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  17. Relyn LawsonNovember 17, 2010 at 10:58 AM

    daughter sister mother wife

    YES!!

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  18. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 17, 2010 at 5:44 PM

    thanks for linking up with potluck.

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/

    award/treats for you. smiles.

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  19. JaneanNovember 18, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    so well said....i like the image.

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