Monday, November 15, 2010

Jingle's potluck poetry

post a poem on
 moods,feelings or emotions
join in the fun at http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

I offer this simple poem


Interweave
These are things that bound my life
I'm daughter,sister,mother,wife
A braided cord around my soul
made out of each,each one a whole
A different kind of love each part,
that knots this cord around my heart
This cord,this knot,has set me free,
You see this love returns to me

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19 comments:

  1. Wonderfully said and what a truism

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  2. Hi John..thanks for taking time from your moving chores
    simple poem but heartfelt
    and it only took me into my fifties to realize this....
    I guess I had to go to Oz first

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  3. A braided cord around my soul... beautiful image and truth about the various loves in our life. A braid is strong and interdependent.

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  4. smart one.
    Glad to see you at potluck.

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  5. This is exceptional..the image, the words that bind..best, is the return!!

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  6. well said and the love will always come back

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  7. Simple words sometimes speak from the depths of our hearts, this you have done well here.

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  8. Love a beauty emotion expressed in so many forms...love the knot a beautiful sign of committment to Love...bkm

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  9. This cord,this knot,has set me free

    A paradox that makes perfect sense, Suz! As usual, simply lovely!

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  10. Dear Suz
    Beautiful imagery and apt picture.. love does return...


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  11. wonderful poem. enjoyed thoroughly. nice job!

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  12. I like the message of how we have different roles as women, and how those roles come together, with love being both the gift and the reward in these roles we play. A simple message, yet true. I also like the rhyming. :)

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  13. nicely done, a very optimistic message and declaration. Thanks for the enjoyable read.

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  14. daughter sister mother wife

    YES!!

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  15. thanks for linking up with potluck.

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/

    award/treats for you. smiles.

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  16. so well said....i like the image.

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