Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Magpie tale


hosts this weekly meme
bless her ghost loving heart


Lies strung like black pearls
Deceit a golden pendant
Love a broken clasp

23 comments:

  1. Oooo... this is my favorite one yet.

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  2. Lovely Magpie, 'love a broken clasp', nice line.

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  3. Somewhat depressing. Somewhat true!

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  4. Hey Doc..not every love not most loves....cheer up it's just a haiku like ditty hee hee

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  5. Very nice -- if a little heart-breaking.

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  6. Suz ... powerful and dark. You said tons with very few words.

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  7. A sad, and all too common story.

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  8. I guess some things can't be fixed..yet are with us always..well done!

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  9. I love it! short and to the point :)

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  10. So yummy! I can imagine this beginning or even ending a book. I like to think beginning... then it can end happily. I guess that is the "romantic" in me.

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  11. I only gasp because it took my breath away!

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  12. So much story in those few words. Good writing Suz.

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  13. how can you even think of these words? too glorious!

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  14. I really like this one, Suz. Nicely written.

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  15. Lovely haiku... stings of broken-hearted love.

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  16. "love a broken clasp"....oh my that is an image filled with emotion....nice Suz...very nice...bkm

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  17. Yes!! I like this . A great Haiku.
    Punchy and packed with meaning.

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  18. Hi Suz,

    Perfect poem and you said it all,
    I loved the idea that love was broken like a clasp.

    Christine

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  19. powerful haiku...so much said

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  20. Suz this is amazing...i love it....so much said in few words...truy lovely! :-)

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