Oooo... this is my favorite one yet.
very goodsad
Lovely Magpie, 'love a broken clasp', nice line.
Somewhat depressing. Somewhat true!
Hey Doc..not every love not most loves....cheer up it's just a haiku like ditty hee hee
Very nice -- if a little heart-breaking.
Suz ... powerful and dark. You said tons with very few words.
A sad, and all too common story.
I guess some things can't be fixed..yet are with us always..well done!
Very powerful.
I love it! short and to the point :)
So yummy! I can imagine this beginning or even ending a book. I like to think beginning... then it can end happily. I guess that is the "romantic" in me.
I only gasp because it took my breath away!
So much story in those few words. Good writing Suz.
how can you even think of these words? too glorious!
I really like this one, Suz. Nicely written.
Lovely haiku... stings of broken-hearted love.
"love a broken clasp"....oh my that is an image filled with emotion....nice Suz...very nice...bkm
Yes!! I like this . A great Haiku.Punchy and packed with meaning.
Hi Suz,Perfect poem and you said it all,I loved the idea that love was broken like a clasp.Christine
powerful haiku...so much said
Suz this is amazing...i love it....so much said in few words...truy lovely! :-)
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Oooo... this is my favorite one yet.
ReplyDeletevery good
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Lovely Magpie, 'love a broken clasp', nice line.
ReplyDeleteSomewhat depressing. Somewhat true!
ReplyDeleteHey Doc..not every love not most loves....cheer up it's just a haiku like ditty hee hee
ReplyDeleteVery nice -- if a little heart-breaking.
ReplyDeleteSuz ... powerful and dark. You said tons with very few words.
ReplyDeleteA sad, and all too common story.
ReplyDeleteI guess some things can't be fixed..yet are with us always..well done!
ReplyDeleteVery powerful.
ReplyDeleteI love it! short and to the point :)
ReplyDeleteSo yummy! I can imagine this beginning or even ending a book. I like to think beginning... then it can end happily. I guess that is the "romantic" in me.
ReplyDeleteI only gasp because it took my breath away!
ReplyDeleteSo much story in those few words. Good writing Suz.
ReplyDeletehow can you even think of these words? too glorious!
ReplyDeleteI really like this one, Suz. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku... stings of broken-hearted love.
ReplyDelete"love a broken clasp"....oh my that is an image filled with emotion....nice Suz...very nice...bkm
ReplyDeleteYes!! I like this . A great Haiku.
ReplyDeletePunchy and packed with meaning.
Hi Suz,
ReplyDeletePerfect poem and you said it all,
I loved the idea that love was broken like a clasp.
Christine
powerful haiku...so much said
ReplyDeleteSuz this is amazing...i love it....so much said in few words...truy lovely! :-)
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