Oooo... this is my favorite one yet.
Lovely Magpie, 'love a broken clasp', nice line.
Somewhat depressing. Somewhat true!
Hey Doc..not every love not most loves....cheer up it's just a haiku like ditty hee hee
Very nice -- if a little heart-breaking.
Suz ... powerful and dark. You said tons with very few words.
A sad, and all too common story.
I guess some things can't be fixed..yet are with us always..well done!
I love it! short and to the point :)
So yummy! I can imagine this beginning or even ending a book. I like to think beginning... then it can end happily. I guess that is the "romantic" in me.
I only gasp because it took my breath away!
So much story in those few words. Good writing Suz.
how can you even think of these words? too glorious!
I really like this one, Suz. Nicely written.
Lovely haiku... stings of broken-hearted love.
"love a broken clasp"....oh my that is an image filled with emotion....nice Suz...very nice...bkm
Yes!! I like this . A great Haiku.Punchy and packed with meaning.
Hi Suz,Perfect poem and you said it all,I loved the idea that love was broken like a clasp.Christine
powerful haiku...so much said
Suz this is amazing...i love it....so much said in few words...truy lovely! :-)
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