Sunday, November 14, 2010

Microfiction #57

hosts a weekly writing meme
Using the below image
write something using only 140 characters





The man in the serape:
tall,handsome,proud,and her father.
But the painting of him was hidden away
as was his side of her heritage.

-135 characters of fiction-

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34 comments:

  1. Awe Suz; very poignant.
    Loved it!

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  2. very nice, suz...

    you are a taleneted writer, my friend...

    happy to see you at Farmhouse...

    kary
    xxx

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  3. Very Nice Suz, Poignant and Heart Tugging.

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  4. That was good. Very full for so few words.

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  5. Suz, you always manage to say so much, using few words. It's a great gift.

    Have a great week, and thank you for your many comments on my blog.

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  6. Oh, I like the air of intrigue and mystery posited here. Excellent MM post, Suz!

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  7. Christina...it is a soul thing isn't it....beyond the words on the page
    thank you for connecting

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  8. A very poignant one it is and it does tug at the soul, Suz! Great one for the day! Enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  9. What an interesting take on this picture-truly original...

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  10. That's a lot of story packed into a few words!

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  11. They say all families have secrets... excellent microfiction!

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  12. Very very good, Suz. I like that way of looking at it.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  13. This one was so touching. Excellent.

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  14. So very good. It just goes to show how much story you can fit into so little space. A real treat, thank you

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  15. Ah, so sad that she didn't know that side! Thank goodness for the internet that will now allow her to find out!

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  16. She'll be proud when she knows, I'm sure.

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  17. Intrigue and mystery - I like it!

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  18. And a Father to boot- Hee-hee-

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  19. A discovery of a mystery... Love it! :O)

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  20. Just a few words but they say so much.

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  21. Beautifully felt and expressed in such few lines.

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  22. i just saw you over at willow's...and when i read..i bow.....i smiled.....

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  23. I was going to use a 'painting' reference this week as well but changed my mind midway through. Yours is great.
    Cheers!

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  24. Good ol' heritage- gets us in trouble every time! Thanks-

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  25. how the narrative unfolds ~ in so few words Suz ~ imagination is caught ~ wondering ~ Love Lib

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  26. hmmm, what might she discover???
    very good story, it leaves me wondering what will happen next.

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  27. Your microfiction is always so wonderful. You have a real gift for it.

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  28. a painting that will pique her children's children interest....

    great story.

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