Hello Michael...so how's the agent?????!!!! This modern haiku is still good practice for condencing and capturing...or at least I tell myself this...:-)
Suz, it would have been so easy to see that as a negative image -draining, losing, ending. I like your take on it, continuing, enhancing, encouraging -I would never had come away with that interpretation on my own. thanks for the perspective.
interesting little verse there...being a channel out into the sea of it all may not be a bad gig...smiles.
ReplyDeletehello Brian, thanks for the visit....
Deletenot a traditional haiku, but it will do for today
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Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHello Michael...so how's the agent?????!!!!
DeleteThis modern haiku is still good practice for condencing and capturing...or at least I tell myself this...:-)
Suz, it would have been so easy to see that as a negative image -draining, losing, ending. I like your take on it, continuing, enhancing, encouraging -I would never had come away with that interpretation on my own. thanks for the perspective.
ReplyDeleteOooh. I got shivers when I read this.
ReplyDeleteI like the simplicity and the philosophy Suz, great work!
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