Wednesday, February 1, 2012



she drains into me
I collect and channel her
words into my sea

7 comments:

  1. interesting little verse there...being a channel out into the sea of it all may not be a bad gig...smiles.

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    1. hello Brian, thanks for the visit....
      not a traditional haiku, but it will do for today
      :)

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    1. Hello Michael...so how's the agent?????!!!!
      This modern haiku is still good practice for condencing and capturing...or at least I tell myself this...:-)

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  3. Suz, it would have been so easy to see that as a negative image -draining, losing, ending. I like your take on it, continuing, enhancing, encouraging -I would never had come away with that interpretation on my own. thanks for the perspective.

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  4. Oooh. I got shivers when I read this.

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  5. I like the simplicity and the philosophy Suz, great work!

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