ok, tell me more...ack,i want some backstory...smiles.
She could fly at any minute.
... one of my all-time favorite haikus.
That's a word I haven't heard before, had to look up the definition. I think this could lead to a good suspenseful short story.
Powerful and sharp, with a mystery that adds to that in the photo. Strange, though, the first two times I read it, my bad eyes saw "falls" instead of "fails" and thought how clever it was to tie into the rain. "Fails" makes more sense, but "falls" would work, too. Just saying.
Ominous - "crow collects the debt"Thanks for a great but different tale.
Oh Roy....that's goodyou most indeed are a poet or writer...every word weighted every word chosenthanks for the insight on this one
Thanks Helen..and happy birthday!
Sean my good fellowhave you not heard of the murder of crows?
Audrey,maybe I'll work on it...who knows where my mind will take it...could be fun thanks for the hint
wow, haunting and well-written.
Great work, lucky crow! :)
U truly are a good writer my sister... And u added vocabulary to me again... :-) Thanks for this...JJRod'z
hummm.... crow likes shiny things? What did crow collect? Nice!
cute,three line magpie, wow.
beautifully neat and to the pointthanks for sharingmartine
short but sweet
neat and concentrated
Brevity is the soul of wit.....and also of Poetry!
A very ominous and portentous Magpie. Amazing how much meaning we can condense into a haiku! Lovely take on this Magpie.
Lovely clever haikuAnna :o]
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