You have certainly captured the emotions that accompany indecision. Very nice!
Nice Magpie. I like the last line.."The oak grip of indecision"
Powerful and vivid. Great Magpie!
Such wonderful and striking metaphor, your words a poetic delight.
The oak gripof indecision. That's a strong grip nice line! Great Magpie!
Great last line!
Love this poem! This must be how my husband feels when he's trying to make a decision. I'm usually a snap decision maker - I might regret it later, but I mostly would rather regret than think too hard.
powerful stuff...to slowly let it cut or move quick and draw it deep...a question that i am glad i do not have to make today...great magpie!
Do something, act, bleed, have it done with..Recover..Miracles happen! Good mag...
Vivid and powerful, especially 'The oak grip of indecision'. One I will have to re-read.Have a lovely weekend x
Indecision. How true your words are! Nice poem with a wonderful edge.
ooh, a fine magpie, suz! it fascinates me to read what so many have seen when they saw this weeks prompt, and yours is not exception!! i could feel the pain of both decisions, knowing both were going in a bad direction!
Gosh, I certainly can relate. We Libras can never make up our minds!
ah yes- the weighing of pros and cons....the agony of choice.
The dilemma of all consuming fear.
Once again, your word choice is amazing...
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