Wednesday, June 30, 2010

Word pool Wednesday(3)

 Ellie,at http://elliegarratt.blogspot.com/ hosts a Wednesday writing meme
On wednesady morning she picks 3 words for you to use one or all three to write a 30 word short story..wow is that flash fiction or what!?

This week's words are:
Use the words
Dragon
Fly
Knight

Boy this is fun

My first try:

She used to believe in a storybook knight
until hers took her to the Dragon Palace on their first date
and he slurped up the fly in his wonton soup

6 comments:

  1. Hi

    Oh this is hilarious!! LOL! I can so picture this and even hear the former knight's slurping! So much for romance!
    Wonderful!!!

    take care
    x

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  2. How to paint a picture in a precious few words - perfect.

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  3. "fly in his wonton soup"! Hilarious.

    Thank you for taking part in the Word Pool challenge, Suz.

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  4. Suz, slurping anything would be enough to shatter her ideals!!! LOL.

    Sorry about the passing of your mom's partner.

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  5. Love it! A real surprise ending.

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  6. A "wanton soup" is so close to a "wanton maid/wench"! What a great parallel! And that fly swooning around is a definite bonus!

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