Oooh, I love this.
Oh, great one, Suz! Mine is along the same line today. Hope you've had a lovley weekend!Sylvia
Really good microfiction, I love the serious tone.I was stumped this week. I think my brain is on vacation!Have a great wk.
I LIKE this!
How Sad, Nice one Suz
Aaaww, I like this one. I *love* it - a rescue, but what kind!
Oooh, sad yet beautiful. I enjoyed this take on the picture.
Ah...I envision a very good bookend for quite a story.
And hopefully she will have a long everlasting life. Well done and a great piece of work. :) Have a great week ahead :)
So sweet and cute! But that dagger suggests a sad tale untold!
A rescue from the dagger but....the swirl of green ocean and water nymphs...sure, why not?! Love your take on this!
That is so lovely, and yet so sad.
I loved this, Suz. Sad and touching. So many emotions.Have a lovely week.
The Sea-team do it again...I went for darker.140 Story
I hope she'll be happier with the mer-people. Good story.
Now that is quite memorable and contains enough food for thought to justify packing away like a slab of chocolate, for a hungry day.
Another sombre story - I hope she'll be happy now.
Oooohhhh, so sad. What sorrow could she possibly have? She's obviously a young lady of privilege, on a ship of privilege (witness the saint paintings)...perhaps she is being transported to marry someone she does not love....sigh...
I love this, Suz. It raises all the questions that a great piece of fiction should.Have a great week.
How sad! What a great story in such few words.
I love this one!
PLEASE I cry, take me with you!!!
This is marvelous. You got skills, girlfriend.
Was the dagger for herself, as in Romeo and Juliette, or was it for the captain of the ship....? Will we ever find out? Thanks for sharing this great take.
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