Sunday, January 22, 2012

magpie tale # 101...


edward's syndrome



daughter in the womb
snug in fetal postion
as your mother weeps

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32 comments:

  1. Dear Suz, you took this prompt and turned it into a magnificent work of relevant poetry ...

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    1. Helen,with tears, I say thank you

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  2. Suz,
    And the circle will be unbroken.
    rel

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    1. Yes, Rel...our circle is a circle for certain..thanks

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  3. my favorite so far by far!!!!

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  4. I'll wonder about this interpretation all day!

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  5. A great take on this photo, and haiku the perfect vehicle.

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    1. NO, YOU WOULDN'T REALLY
      BUT i GET WHAT YOU SAY AND i THANK YOU

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  7. Poignant...thinking of you and yours...

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    1. there are many kinds of broken heart
      thank you Wrinks

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  8. wow evocative suz...esp that last line...masterfully done...

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    1. this one was easy
      so strong I felt it
      thanks Brian

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  9. Dear Suz,
    I wished I had written this...

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    1. coming from you...thank you
      you honor me

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  10. Imaginative, creative, moving...

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    1. thank you Mama Zen....in a way it is the most beautiful

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  12. I have decided I don't like this picture after all.

    I am glad to see you have made something non-sexist of it.

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    1. Friko...I didn't like it either...but then, it came to me....this one had my name on it
      thanks

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  13. You picked up on the childlike feel of this strange photo...

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    1. Trell...it is a strange photo...like offering up a young maiden as a snack...ick
      But then I saw the fetal position and that change everything thanks

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    1. thanks, Red....it is...for a while anyway
      keep that tissue box handy

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  15. I adore this Suz!!! Awesome haiku!!!!

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