Sunday, January 22, 2012

magpie tale # 101...


edward's syndrome



daughter in the womb
snug in fetal postion
as your mother weeps

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31 comments:

  1. HelenJanuary 22, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    Dear Suz, you took this prompt and turned it into a magnificent work of relevant poetry ...

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  2. relJanuary 22, 2012 at 11:36 AM

    Suz,
    And the circle will be unbroken.
    rel

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    1. SuzJanuary 22, 2012 at 3:53 PM

      Yes, Rel...our circle is a circle for certain..thanks

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  3. Laurie KolpJanuary 22, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    Lovely take on the picture.

    http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/warning-small-package.html

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  4. KayJanuary 22, 2012 at 12:31 PM

    my favorite so far by far!!!!

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  5. Rosaria WilliamsJanuary 22, 2012 at 1:17 PM

    I'll wonder about this interpretation all day!

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  6. KarenJanuary 22, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    A great take on this photo, and haiku the perfect vehicle.

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  7. SuzJanuary 22, 2012 at 3:53 PM

    NO, YOU WOULDN'T REALLY
    BUT i GET WHAT YOU SAY AND i THANK YOU

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  8. Tess KincaidJanuary 22, 2012 at 3:58 PM

    Excellent...brings a tear...

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  9. Wrinkling DailyJanuary 22, 2012 at 9:05 PM

    Poignant...thinking of you and yours...

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    1. SuzJanuary 23, 2012 at 7:39 AM

      there are many kinds of broken heart
      thank you Wrinks

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  10. Brian MillerJanuary 22, 2012 at 10:09 PM

    wow evocative suz...esp that last line...masterfully done...

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    1. SuzJanuary 23, 2012 at 7:39 AM

      this one was easy
      so strong I felt it
      thanks Brian

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  11. ninotazizJanuary 23, 2012 at 12:04 AM

    Dear Suz,
    I wished I had written this...

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  12. BerowneJanuary 23, 2012 at 5:41 AM

    Imaginative, creative, moving...

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  13. SuzJanuary 23, 2012 at 7:40 AM

    thank you Sir berowne

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  14. Maude LynnJanuary 23, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    Beautiful piece.

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    1. SuzJanuary 24, 2012 at 4:49 PM

      thank you Mama Zen....in a way it is the most beautiful

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  15. FrikoJanuary 23, 2012 at 2:11 PM

    I have decided I don't like this picture after all.

    I am glad to see you have made something non-sexist of it.

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    1. SuzJanuary 24, 2012 at 4:51 PM

      Friko...I didn't like it either...but then, it came to me....this one had my name on it
      thanks

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  16. TrellissimoJanuary 23, 2012 at 3:59 PM

    You picked up on the childlike feel of this strange photo...

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    1. SuzJanuary 24, 2012 at 4:52 PM

      Trell...it is a strange photo...like offering up a young maiden as a snack...ick
      But then I saw the fetal position and that change everything thanks

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  17. life in red shoesJanuary 23, 2012 at 8:26 PM

    Very moving, the dust will settle.

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    1. SuzJanuary 24, 2012 at 4:49 PM

      thanks, Red....it is...for a while anyway
      keep that tissue box handy

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  18. Tumblewords:January 23, 2012 at 9:26 PM

    Poignant piece!

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  19. Carrie Van HornJanuary 24, 2012 at 1:14 PM

    I adore this Suz!!! Awesome haiku!!!!

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    1. SuzJanuary 24, 2012 at 4:53 PM

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  20. JJ Roa RodriguezJanuary 24, 2012 at 7:07 PM

    A different take sis!

    JJRod'z

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