prompt where you write a story or poem using only 140 character or less.
This week's photo prompt:
White beauty
your Swan wildness harnessed
by clipped wings
Your kingdom now:
fear,aggression,curiosity,
indifference-
with grace
Sunday, April 11, 2010
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Beautiful, Suz! How fun it is to see what different takes on the same picture everyone has! I love it! Hope you had a good weekend and great week ahead!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Ooo I love the kingdom. :) Excellent take on the picture my friend :)
ReplyDeleteSylvia and Thom..thank you
ReplyDeleteLike a sweet sweet poem;
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful my friend.
Great take on the picture Suz.
I liked the 'clipped wings' leading to a kingdom running the gamut from aggression to indifference. Well done!
ReplyDeletealways graceful indeed!
ReplyDeleteYour swanny microfiction is like poetry with strong but lovely ruffles on it. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the clipping makes them that way, or whether they're just naturally a bit . . . swannish!
ReplyDeleteNice poem!
two thumbs up, suz!
ReplyDeletei like the clipped wings making the swan's kingdom change...
ReplyDeleteIndifference with grace. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, especially your last verse. Beautifully done, Suz!
ReplyDeleteHave you a great week!
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shakira
You've pulled so much from that photo Suz! How many people out there are living just that life, of clipped wings and so much emotion locked up behind dignity. I love, love, love this.
ReplyDeleteYou've pulled so much from that photo Suz! How many people out there are living just that life, of clipped wings and so much emotion locked up behind dignity. I love, love, love this.
ReplyDeleteOK, are you ready?
ReplyDeleteShe hung her head and shed a tear,
Frank had run off with Randall.
"Not again," she said quietly to herself.
See! I'm getting better at this;)
a lot said in these few words! love it
ReplyDeleteMany images evoked by those few words. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteMy Microfiction
Neat verse. This week I have dug into mythology for my micro story
ReplyDeleteThey are graceful birds, that's for sure!
ReplyDeleteThis one made me think.
The swan is portrayed as a beautiful graceful creature. I almost want to be a swan. love it.
ReplyDeletehave a great week.
Susan had a wonderful comment on this. Helps me understand. I couldn't get past the "clipped wings". (you know me)
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