Sunday, April 18, 2010

Microfiction Monday # 27

Susan,over at http://stonyriver.ie/ host a weekly writing prompt.  Using only 140 characters
write a story or poem



This week's photo prompt

Hold that Pose!
"My feet are killing me."
"Well,I can't breath in this corset."
"Yea, well you think you have it bad, I have to go pee!" 
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20 comments:

  1. PeggyApril 18, 2010 at 5:39 PM

    Suz;

    I know just how these girls feel, as do most women. You speak for the masses.
    Good story and good job!

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  2. Sylvia KApril 18, 2010 at 6:08 PM

    Oh, yes! Me, too! And you do speak for all of us!! Fun story, Suz! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  3. Michael G-GApril 18, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    Priceless!

    Have a great week.

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  4. Karen L RApril 18, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    perfect!

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  5. RAApril 18, 2010 at 7:34 PM

    The words fit the image so well. LOL. Poor girls. I hope they were soon released from their suffering ;). Have a wonderful week.

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  6. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}April 18, 2010 at 8:08 PM

    I laughed out loud at this, Nice one, and Very Funny

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  7. christopherApril 18, 2010 at 10:47 PM

    Excellent caption...great all around!

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  8. John (@bookdreamer)April 19, 2010 at 12:28 AM

    The picnic was not going well... I'm still on the lyrical theme. My micro-fiction

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  9. SouthLakesMomApril 19, 2010 at 5:04 AM

    Oh posing - what an empty thing to do! You captured it perfectly.

    Have fun with the grands!

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  10. Susan at Stony RiverApril 19, 2010 at 5:56 AM

    ROFLMAO!!
    Ah, the dreaded all-family studio photograph! What torture, and then we hang it over the mantle to remind ourselves for years to come. I laughed out loud to think of these serene girls doing the same!

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  11. LucyApril 19, 2010 at 6:35 AM

    Thank you for visiting me on my blog!! That picture fits me to a tee. No shoes and absolutely no corset.

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  12. jabblogApril 19, 2010 at 6:51 AM

    Wonderful and all so apt! I'm sure we women can all relate . . .

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  13. SuzApril 19, 2010 at 7:56 AM

    Oh, now that was good!
    and oh so true

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  14. AnonymousApril 19, 2010 at 7:59 AM

    Even a goddess gets cranky after a long day...

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  15. KristineApril 19, 2010 at 8:46 AM

    haha. to suffer in the name of a goot pose. I can definitely relate to that! ☺☺. have a great week!

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  16. UnknownApril 19, 2010 at 10:26 AM

    Ah, the joys of being woman. We've all been there and done that!

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  17. GrandmaApril 19, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    This one was a bit too realistic. The thought of feet dangling in water while having the urge to pee is not safe for an old lady with a weak bladder. LOL

    Thanks for such a fun take on this pic.

    My MM: The Break

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  18. hopeApril 19, 2010 at 5:34 PM

    I wondered how long they had to hold that pose...I would be the one who needed the bathroom break. :)

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  19. Sylvia MoriceApril 19, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    Corsets too tight? Feet sore? I can identify with the feelings of these nymphs...great job.

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  20. UnknownApril 20, 2010 at 1:14 AM

    WOW.. great take,Suz!
    Excellent MM!
    Have you a great week!
    Mine is here
    hugs
    shakira

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