The theme this week is 7 Deadly Sins
Ten on a tablet wasn't enough,
they lusted after power,envious of greedy God
setting all the rules, so in their gluttony for control
of the commerce of forgiveness, their pridefulness
separated many from repentance...
instead, left them leaving full of wrath
Thank you Jingle for the challenge
BRAVO!!!!
ReplyDeleteSo thrilled to have you in.
ReplyDeletevery compact but powerful sin poem...
pleasant treat.
Excellent piece.
ReplyDeleteNice take on the seven. I like how you included sloth without having to say the word (left them leaving full...
ReplyDeletePerfect! Bravissimo!
ReplyDeletevery well written and also very true! Man´s greed for power over others..............
ReplyDeleteKathew..bravissimo?!
ReplyDeletewow...you've met them too
John..you've got that right
Teri...so it worked...thanks for noticing
Marilyn and Jingle..thank you for commenting and for being so generous
I see why you could not get more comments, would you please choose your comment option as pop up,
ReplyDeletemany of jingle poetry participants use word press, they don't have a google account, thus could not comment easily..
I valued your participation.
cheers!
keep shining.