Great haiku, "highlighting" what is not said.
Wonderful Haiku. Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender
Impermanence told... Isn't it funny that we think of the cemetery as our final destination for our mortal remains - but it's not really all that permanent, is it?
Wow, I didn't even notice the pine needles until now! Lovely!
You really know how to get the most bang for your buck! So good!
Somebody commented that mine used only thirteen words.. Compared to you I am a blabbermouth!
Short & 2 the point.
Short and to the point. I love it! :-)
Oh my Stafford...I just luv youha ha blabbbermouth...made my day..and I needed it my friend
Total truth..so few words necessary! Lovely...
Yes impermanence says it all.Perfect and just the right number of words... mine was memories and true.
it's that time of year...
yeah, impermanence, even in a graveyard... lovely haiku.
Wonderful haiku and so true.
Hi Again SuzNo we are no longer in touch, altough we went to the same fee paying school, her parents were well off and my mother's sister struggled to pay the fees, but she wanted to as it was my mother's request that I should have a good education and the money she left ran out!! Maeve, that was my friends name, became a Dr, Irish catholic and now lives in Ireland. I became a nurse, Welsh and welsh chapel, we couldn't be further apart. I wrote to her via Friends Reunited but no response but who knows one day? Christine x(This is my regular blog)
Beautiful haiku, Suz.
Yes, a timely reminder, indeed.
excellent closing line...what is permenent? well maybe the marker i used on the wall at my moms house...but that was years ago...
Simple, deep words...
Says it all. Nice Magpie.
Beautiful haiku .....
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