Monday, October 18, 2010

microfiction #53

hosts a weekly meme
using the below illustration
write using only 140 characters or less

 Her treachery shown more than her beauty
So he walled her into a room
to die in darkness as he would
knowing her love was a lie



  1. Wouldn´t like to get on your wrong side Suz with an imagination like that! Great story in so few words what a great writer you are.

  2. gosh John..thanks...This was a hard one...I just couldn't muster any funny stuff of fluff
    I'm in a inward space right now...guess it shows

  3. I really didn't like this prompt, it just seemed like a mean thing to do. But you did a good job, as always!

  4. DEEP!...dawg-gone that "LOVE" thang!

  5. I agree..I didn't like this one either..seemed the story was told already..but it does challenge the stubborn mind

  6. Eeeeek! They both are a hurtin' :O(

  7. why thank you Anthony.. a king must think of his kingdom first

  8. Back in the day.
    Sometimes the only remedy of false love was to put their intended to death. Not so much these days,I hope.
    Good take Suz, sad but true!

  9. Great, sad one, Suz. The prompt was hard for me this time, too. I wanted to do something silly but just couldn't seem to come up with it. Love yours! Have a great week!


  10. Now, this is one of few MfM posts today where I want the princess to be walled in...She's bad news. Excellent!!

  11. That's a sad ending to that fairy tale.

  12. I don't know who I feel more sorry for--the princess or the king. Both are likely to live the remainders of their lives with regret..

    Have a great week. Cheers!

  13. I'm another one who didn't think much of the picture when I first saw it. Now I'm amazed because so many people read completely different things into it. I never even thought of how the king felt. Good for you.

    Kay, Alberta

  14. But she looks so innocent... LOL!

  15. great take, Suz!
    medieval time was tough...

  16. A good story, Suz. Amazing how you went so deep and dark in only 139 characters!

    Have a great week.

  17. Very beautiful! One of my favorites this week.


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