Beautiful poem! Love the contrasts between 1st and 2nd stanzas. January makes me weary but nature is always so reviving to me. And always revived when I come here to read your words. Nice alliterations too! Publish and share with the world, Suz! They need your voice. P.S. Thanks for nice comment on my blog!
I like the line "in the silence of a stone" - just did 2 posts on the silence and inner stillness of stones--
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Suz. Love your use of language and imagery.
ReplyDeleteLayers,there is something powerful about the stillness of a stone
ReplyDelete..a kept knowledge
Goldenbird,thanks..
i also like the image of the bending branch. Suz, you're one talented gal. tell me you're going to publish your poems!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteLove the contrasts between 1st and 2nd stanzas. January makes me weary but nature is always so reviving to me. And always revived when I come here to read your words. Nice alliterations too! Publish and share with the world, Suz! They need your voice.
P.S. Thanks for nice comment on my blog!
I really like your Monday poem...the first two lines hit solid for me...lovely Suz!
ReplyDeleteand i didn't think anyone was listening
ReplyDeleteOh, we're listening. And appreciating your thoughts and talent for expressing them.
ReplyDeleteYummy words. Thanks.
ReplyDeletehm. like this.
ReplyDeleteBethany..thanks
ReplyDeletei was weary when i wrote it
and not when i was done