Yours is nice and mellow, mine is about the moment that is about to disturb their peace...again Here be mine.
Very nice, creates a certain atmosphere. I enjoyed it!
Excellent take on the photo. Very peaceful :) Well done :)
Sometimes the Peace of the Country is all it takes. Nice one Suz.
Nice!Could be a good opening for a much longer story as well.
Such punch those last two lines. That's what I like about your stories/poems, never predictable, always make you think!Hm, character count, never thought about trying that one out. Counting words seems relatively easy by comparison!Thanks for visiting my blog and your kind words. Yep, photo trip tempts me!!
Bittersweet - how often do we wish we could relive a moment differently.
A nice interpretation. Great words.
Lovely -- to live long enough with one another to reach that point...well done!And I love the photos of the sunset. Wow!
Sometimes silence says it all.
I really like that , Sue.. DH and I are like that too. Silence is so precious between two souls.Excellent 55!Mine is hereHappy MM!Have a wonderful week!hugsshakira
Suz, you take it from a game to art. That's just so lovely -- and so in tune with my own thoughts this week that I *doubly* enjoyed it.
This is a very evocative glimpse into an intriguing relationship. Is this where their story begins, or ends?
nice one. they've been together all these years after all. And body language says it all.
a beautiful serene scene with turbulent undercurrents. loved this!
Are they splitting up? Unhappy with each other after all these years?
I'm glad the ducks got fed...nicely done.
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