hosts a weekly writing prompt.
Using the below photo write a poem or vignette
Gunpowder romance
Night skies starbursts of light
Chinese New Year
Fourth of July
Sox Park homerun
scoreboard
Brief fragments
of unbridled joy
Moments
cascading into darkness
and are over
You have captured the fragile phenomena of fireworks! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteVery, very nice, Suz!
ReplyDeleteIf that doesn't say it all then I don't know what could be added...'cascading into darkness and are over' Great finish!
ReplyDeleteLet the fireworks begin, then end...wonderful rendition.
ReplyDeleteBlessYourSenses
really nice Suz. Well done..
ReplyDeleteVery clever. I read it once and thought "clever". Then I read it again and thought "very clever"
ReplyDeleteOH> So many reasons for fireworks. Love this Magpie!
ReplyDeleteaah..but no one knew I wasn't talking about real fireworks..:(
ReplyDeletebut I guess it works the other way ..literally..too
Things that go pop and vanish into the dark - fireflies of life! Nice!
ReplyDeleteSuz--Your link was broken at Magpie Tales. I almost didn't find you! I'm wondering if you are just talking about the actual holidays OR (big OR) ahem...something else??? Love that "cascading into darkness" line. Really nice. Really visual.
ReplyDeleteActually I was talking about a romance
ReplyDeletethat was new (Chinese)
liberating (the 4th)
but actually only a score (baseball)
and then gone (real fireworks)
but I guess I dropped the ball on this on..but if I captured fireworks literally..okay
nicely done! Love "moments cascading into darkness"
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