This is so tender...love the image and the lines! Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and for signing on! I don't generally post every day, but try to make it worth your while when I do. This week has been all about To Kill a Mockingbird for me...at home...for travel...and for the blog!
aw, suz, this was just beautiful! not only did you write an exquisite mfmonday but the few words that you used were powerful and deeply sad. what an amazing feat you've accomplished!
Awe, so sad and very nicely written! Good one.
ReplyDeleteIt is sad, but it is a great one for the day! I always enjoy reading all the very different takes on the same pic! Fun! Have a great week, Suz!
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A sad but wonderful Memory he must have had. Nice one Suz
ReplyDeleteThis is so tender...love the image and the lines!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for stopping by my blog and for signing on! I don't generally post every day, but try to make it worth your while when I do. This week has been all about To Kill a Mockingbird for me...at home...for travel...and for the blog!
Ohh, this is so sad...very touching. I can just picture the old man's sorrow as he gazes at the yellowed ad. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteSuch beauty in such sadness achieved in just a few words!
ReplyDeleteOhh--this one is sad, but very well written and captured. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteaw, suz, this was just beautiful! not only did you write an exquisite mfmonday but the few words that you used were powerful and deeply sad. what an amazing feat you've accomplished!
ReplyDeleteGood job...you do not disappoint!
ReplyDeleteClever take. Gone for vive la différence for the weekend today. Click here to read my nano story.
ReplyDeleteSo sad, and beautifully written. Your microfictions always make me stop and think, Suz.
ReplyDeleteSo poignant. This has been my favorite of the week, so far.
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful and poignant. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteAwww that is just too sweet. I love it. Cheers to dad :) Have a great week ahead :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful, and sad.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
It's lovely and very sad. I think it's the best today.
ReplyDeleteSo much packed into this...so much true feeling...
ReplyDeleteJust a few words but such emotion.
ReplyDeleteLots of emotion in such a little package. Great job!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful take.
ReplyDeleteRepeat after me; I MUST SUBMIT THIS.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful story that tells!
ReplyDeleteAnd OMG what a wonderful story could start with that as a first line -- Suz, it's a keeper all over.
Aw, you get first prize for "sweetness" today. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, as usual. You have the most amazing imagination.
ReplyDeleteTight and terribly tender. One instance where I wish there was more than 140 chars, Suz - really really lovely tear-jerker.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely, Sue.
ReplyDeleteAw, that was really bittersweet.
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