Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Wednesday poem

One shot Wednesday Poem, a place to share your poem
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/

 Whether

When I hear a storm coming
like bad boy attraction

when the trees bend
like bent code of conduct

and the rain comes down so hard,
I remember my first storm

Chill
chill
chill
thrill

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13 comments:

  1. ha. gotta watch out for those bad boy storms...lol. love the playful form...nicely done. thanks for linking up to oneshot!

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  2. I guess I'm glad after years of yearning for bad boys I picked Dr. M - who would LIKE to be bad, but is really just a teddy bear.

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  3. ah but I married the calm sea
    but ya know...those bad boys look good when your young and stupid

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  4. Hello Rick! hmmm...I'm just a thinking....

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  5. I always love your writings and this is no exception.

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  6. Bad boy huh? Is there something you would like to tell me?

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  7. Strange to relate - but perfectly true - a massive storm has just broken here as I read your poem.

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  8. transparentnow...shucks..thanks
    Red...lots
    Alan..I hope you mean a real storm.
    I love storms...there is something that seems dangerous, but you can't stop watching it collect itself...wind fury and pounding rain...and of course lightening...
    just like love

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  9. You make me want another hard storm to appear...great entry
    Dar

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