It's word Pool Wednesday too!
Ellie Garratt at http://elliegarratt.blogspot.com/ hosts a weekly writing challenge
In 33 words write a story using one or all three of the below words
Reflection
Soul
Mirror
In my car's side mirror I saw the reflection
of the poor soul along the road wrapped in a white tarp.
As police waved me on, I knew I would remember them forever.
-33-
another fun challenge
i have never heard of the word pool wednesday but i am impressed with your 33 word offering!! it's short, to the point and i would have to agree with you- i would have remembered him forever!! powerful and deeply sad...i loved the photo, suz!!
ReplyDeletethanks Sheri...i love these challenges...I love cutting words..writing to the bone
ReplyDeleteWonderful!! I loved the image of the white tarp - the police waving the MC on. Lovely and sad and memorable!
ReplyDeleteTake care
x
You did well!! :-)
ReplyDeletehow do you always do it. you have a way with the english language.
ReplyDeleteMemorable music! This gently plays the strings of the soul!
ReplyDeleteSorry for not commenting on your story earlier, Suz. I didn't get in from work until late last night.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written and sad. After reading your 7th July post, your microfiction seems all the more poignant.
So sorry for your loss. Hugs x
I have goosebumps!
ReplyDeleteBlessYourHeartSuz