I just couldn't get to blogging yesterday and today isn't much better. But I was able to find an old poem,written about 4years ago at a poetry workshop. We were given the word "interior". We could interpret it any way we wished. This was my take. I haven't looked at it since then until today. It's not bad,needs work,but hey,here it is:
Interior
The house inside.
The things you rest upon,eat upon,weep across.
Aged things,handed down,stolen.
Things you live with because you want to.
Interior
Reached by going into,down to,or sometimes
up to,secret cobweb cubbies,
broken parts,live wires.
A frontier space of old growth forests
and raging rivers
where things can hide from the hunter
Interior,
the neglected inside of many
a freshly painted house.
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We only got ten minutes to write a poem...so go easy on me.
My family is on their way back to California... me sad.
I like the imagery of the "frontier space of old growth forests and raging rivers." I used to write poetry, too, but it's been a long time.
ReplyDeleteSorry you're missing your family ... will you see them again for the holidays?
Yes Goldenbird, they are coming back Dec 23...I hope not sick this time!
ReplyDeleteI know I have a few raging rivers and old growth forests in me! Thanks for commenting
Love the poem. Lucky you to have your grandchildren for the Holidays.
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